1. Redundant rows 2. Release name issues Should replase LTS23 with LTS24 3. Lines are too long, the line jumping becomes too hard The standard recommendation is to use something in the region of 40-120 characters per line.
See http://lxgit.wrs.com/cgit/layers/wr-bsps/microchip-polarfire-soc.git/tree/README?h=WRLINUX_10_24_LTS
